作业帮求助（急）谁能帮我改一下这段文章的错误A boy who's father left his mother and him was very loving music.but his family was very poor.His mother was a former web designer and she also was a singer in a church band.And two jobs just t
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求助（急）谁能帮我改一下这段文章的错误A boy who's father left his mother and him was very loving music.but his family was very poor.His mother was a former web designer and she also was a singer in a church band.And two jobs just t
求助（急）谁能帮我改一下这段文章的错误
A boy who's father left his mother and him was very loving music.but his family was very poor.His mother was a former web designer and she also was a singer in a church band.And two jobs just to made ends meet.They lived in public housing,so the boy could not singing in it.But he never give up his hobit .He even played his music in front of a theatre to earn money to buy an old guita.And now,he becoming a famous star.
求助（急）谁能帮我改一下这段文章的错误A boy who's father left his mother and him was very loving music.but his family was very poor.His mother was a former web designer and she also was a singer in a church band.And two jobs just t
按照每一句给你指出来：
1.who's 改成whose
2.没问题
3.没问题
4.made 改成make
5.in public housing 改成in a public house; singing 改成sing
6.give 改成gave; hobit 改成hobby
7.in front of 改成in the front of
8.becoming 改成becomes; 大致就是这样了
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A boy whose father left his mother and him was very loving music.but his family was very poor.His mother was a former web designer and she also was a singer in a church band.And two jobs just to made...
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A boy whose father left his mother and him was very loving music.but his family was very poor.His mother was a former web designer and she also was a singer in a church band.And two jobs just to made ends meet.They lived in public housing,so the boy could not singing in it.But he never give up his hobit .He even played his music in front of a theatre to earn money to buy an old guita.And now,he becoming a famous star.
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