英语改错共10处Travelling is one of my favorite activity.What i want to do whenever i am free is to go to a beautiful place to enjoy their scenery.Last month ,i went to Dalian for a trip ,where is a city by sea.It is easier to go there by train;

英语改错共10处Travelling is one of my favorite activity.What i want to do whenever i am free is to go to a beautiful place to enjoy their scenery.Last month ,i went to Dalian for a trip ,where is a city by sea.It is easier to go there by train;
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Travelling is one of my favorite activity.What i want to do whenever i am free is to go to a beautiful place to enjoy their scenery.Last month ,i went to Dalian for a trip ,where is a city by sea.It is easier to go there by train;besides,you can take the bus and the plane as well.As soon as i got to there ,my cousin went to meet me at the railway station.We visited many interesting places the following days,had a lot of fun.Unlucky,i caught a cold while travelling but it was not serious .During the trip,i make friends with different people including two foreigners from America.

英语改错共10处Travelling is one of my favorite activity.What i want to do whenever i am free is to go to a beautiful place to enjoy their scenery.Last month ,i went to Dalian for a trip ,where is a city by sea.It is easier to go there by train;
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Travelling is one of my favorite activity (activities).What i want to do whenever i am free is to go to a beautiful place to enjoy their(its) scenery. Last month ,i went to Dalian for a trip ,where (w...

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Travelling is one of my favorite activity (activities).What i want to do whenever i am free is to go to a beautiful place to enjoy their(its) scenery. Last month ,i went to Dalian for a trip ,where (which) is a city by sea. It is easier to go there by train;besides,you can take the bus (去掉the)and( or) the plane (去掉the) as well. As soon as i got to there(去掉to) , my cousin went to meet me at the railway station.We visited many interesting places the following days,(and) had a lot of fun. Unlucky(Unluckily), i caught a cold while travelling but it was not serious .During the trip, i make(made) friends with different people including two foreigners from America.

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