英语翻译本文在介绍核心竞争力基本理论的基础上,结合苏州大成置业发展有限公司的实际对其现有的核心竞争力状况做了简要的分析,找出其在核心竞争力上存在的问题以及原因,并对此提出

英语翻译本文在介绍核心竞争力基本理论的基础上,结合苏州大成置业发展有限公司的实际对其现有的核心竞争力状况做了简要的分析,找出其在核心竞争力上存在的问题以及原因,并对此提出
英语翻译
本文在介绍核心竞争力基本理论的基础上,结合苏州大成置业发展有限公司的实际对其现有的核心竞争力状况做了简要的分析,找出其在核心竞争力上存在的问题以及原因,并对此提出改进对策.这些研究成果为我国房地产企业的培核心竞争力管理模式提供了理论依据及实际操作示范,具有较强的理论及实用价值.
我的英语虽然不行，但机器和人还是分得清的。所以不要用机器翻译的来糊弄我，

英语翻译本文在介绍核心竞争力基本理论的基础上,结合苏州大成置业发展有限公司的实际对其现有的核心竞争力状况做了简要的分析,找出其在核心竞争力上存在的问题以及原因,并对此提出
不好意思,才看到你发的消息.来晚了
首先,我把几个专业名词等的特定翻译写出来.
核心竞争力Core Competence
置业 Property
本文在介绍核心竞争力基本理论的基础上,结合苏州大成置业发展有限公司的实际对其现有的核心竞争力状况做了简要的分析,找出其在核心竞争力上存在的问题以及原因,并对此提出改进对策.这些研究成果为我国房地产企业的培核心竞争力管理模式提供了理论依据及实际操作示范,具有较强的理论及实用价值.
This paper briefly anayses the current situation of core competence of Suzhou Dacheng Properties Development Co.Ltd.by combining the elementary theory of core competence with the firm's practice.Then it fingers out the causes of the existing problems and proposes the remedial measures .The results of the research provide the core competence management of China with a valuable theory basis and operation demonstration.
这里我向说明几点
1.找出其在核心竞争力上存在的问题以及原因.
机译的不理,leungs翻译的是identifies the problems and causes existing in its core competitiveness.他的句子写出来就是"在核心竞争力里存在的问题和原因".我想知道,这个"竞争力里的原因"是什么?LZ是想说“问题的产生原因”,而如果用the problems and its causes 也行,但是identifies the problems and its causes existing in its core competitiveness就更离谱了,一个句子出现2个its代词,指代的又不是同一件事物.犯了英语的大忌---指代不明.我翻译成了it fingers out the causes of the existing problems .既简洁也符合英语逻辑.
2.另外identify一般用于“身份的,事物的认证”,指出问题不常用这个词.
3.这些研究成果为我国房地产企业的培核心竞争力管理模式提供了理论依据及实际操作示范,具有较强的理论及实用价值.
..英语最忌讳的是用此重复和啰嗦,这里中文说"提供了理论依据及实际操作示范",后面又说理论及实用价值."理论""实际"2词重复出现,不免啰嗦.我直接用“valuable”代替,省掉后面一大截.用provide ..with也简化了句子的复杂性.管理模式翻译成management即可.
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Based on the foundational theories of core competitiveness,this article presents a brief analysis on the state of core competitiveness in Suzhou Dacheng Property Development Ltd. It identifies the iss...

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Based on the foundational theories of core competitiveness,this article presents a brief analysis on the state of core competitiveness in Suzhou Dacheng Property Development Ltd. It identifies the issues and reasons on core competitiveness, as well as strategies for improvement. These research findings provide theoretical basis for and demonstrate in practice the operation of core competitiveness management model in real estate corporations of China. It has high theoretical and practical values.

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In this paper, introduced the core competitiveness of the basic theory on the basis of Suzhou Ltd. Dacheng the actual home buyers to its existing core competitiveness of the situation in a brief analysis to identify its core competitiveness on the problems and causes And measures to improve this. These research results for China's real estate business training and core competitiveness of the management model provides a theoretical basis and practical demonstrations, has strong theoretical and practical value.

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Based on the introduction to foundational theories of core competitiveness, this article presents a brief analysis on the current core competitiveness according to the situation of Suzhou Dacheng Prop...

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Based on the introduction to foundational theories of core competitiveness, this article presents a brief analysis on the current core competitiveness according to the situation of Suzhou Dacheng Properties Development Co., Ltd, and identifies the problems and causes existing in its core competitiveness so as to suggest recommendations for improvement. These reseach findings, which are of high theoretical and practical value, provide theoretical basis and demonstration of practical operation for Chinese real estate corporations' application of the core competitiveness management model.

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到目前为止,leungsk翻得最好,鉴赏完毕.

Based on the fundamental theory of core competitiveness, this article has analyzed the current core competitiveness of Suzhou Dacheng Properties Development Co. Ltd, combining with its present conditi...

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Based on the fundamental theory of core competitiveness, this article has analyzed the current core competitiveness of Suzhou Dacheng Properties Development Co. Ltd, combining with its present condition. Then it has found out the existing problems and reasons of this company on the core competitiveness, and put forward some countermeasure. These research results, with high theoretical and practical value, have offered academic foundation and actual operational demonstrations to our national real estate enterprises on the core competitiveness management mode.
P.S. 楼主的最后一句话里多了个“培”字吧，应该是“为我国房地产企业的核心竞争力管理模式提供了…”

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This text is on the basis of key competitiveness basic theories of the introduction, have made brief analysis to their existing key competitiveness states in reality of combining the strong points of ...

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This text is on the basis of key competitiveness basic theories of the introduction, have made brief analysis to their existing key competitiveness states in reality of combining the strong points of Suzhou and buying property in Development Co., Ltd, find out its problem and reason existing on key competitiveness, and propose improving the countermeasure to this. These research results have offered theoretical foundation and practical operation to demonstrate for banking up the management mode of the key competitiveness with earth of the real estate enterprises of our country, have stronger theory and practical value.

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