谁能帮我改改这英文信中的错误?How nice to hear from you again and see your photos,you can see from the photos is a very pretty girl.For your face I'm sorry,I hope you can be more strong to face life,the world needs peace not it?We write

谁能帮我改改这英文信中的错误?How nice to hear from you again and see your photos,you can see from the photos is a very pretty girl.For your face I'm sorry,I hope you can be more strong to face life,the world needs peace not it?We write
谁能帮我改改这英文信中的错误?
How nice to hear from you again and see your photos,you can see from the photos is a very pretty girl.For your face I'm sorry,I hope you can be more strong to face life,the world needs peace not it?
We write the exchange of water far away outside the Mille Collines is a rare thing,there is also a need for genuine communication.In July this year I graduated from college to the work of pharmaceutical companies.I like swimming,computer games,do not know if you like it or not?
At present,China is still in the Spring Festival,it is a one of China's traditional festivals.People are living in a sea of joy,firecrackers dumplings.I am afraid you have not seen a dumpling bar,e-mail to your dumplings with a photo and my photos.
Waiting for your reply.,it is a one of China's traditional festivals.People are living in a sea of joy,firecrackers dumplings.I am afraid you have not seen a dumpling,e-mail to your dumplings with a photo and my photos.
May the joy and happiness around you today and always.

谁能帮我改改这英文信中的错误?How nice to hear from you again and see your photos,you can see from the photos is a very pretty girl.For your face I'm sorry,I hope you can be more strong to face life,the world needs peace not it?We write
How nice it is to hear from you again and see your photos,I can see that you are a very pretty girl from the photos .For your face I'm sorry,I hope you can be more strong to face up to life,the world needs peace doesn't it?
We wrote the exchange of water far away outside the Mille Collines and it is a rare thing,there is also a need for genuine communication.In July this year I will graduate from college and go to the work of pharmaceutical companies.I like swimming and computer games,do you like it or not?
At present,China is still in the Spring Festival,it is one of China's traditional festivals.People are living in a sea of joy,firecrackers and dumplings.I am afraid you have not seen a dumpling bar,so I'll e-mail dumplings with a photo and my photos to you.
Waiting for your reply.May the joy and happiness around you forever.
如果有改错意思的地方可以告诉我哟~