作业帮大家帮忙看看这句话有没有语病,我怎么看着这么别扭呢?The weather is getting cooler up,feeling more and better
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大家帮忙看看这句话有没有语病,我怎么看着这么别扭呢?The weather is getting cooler up,feeling more and better
大家帮忙看看这句话有没有语病,我怎么看着这么别扭呢?
The weather is getting cooler up,feeling more and better
大家帮忙看看这句话有没有语病,我怎么看着这么别扭呢?The weather is getting cooler up,feeling more and better
1.The weather is geting cooler. up在这里不对,可以说 the tempreture is getting up/down.
2. feeling more and better 的逻辑主语是“the weather”,因此肯定不对.不知想表达什么意思,是说“我感觉越来越好吗?”可以说：
The weather is getting cooler, which makes me feel better and better.
The weather is getting coolerand cooler, we are feeling better and better.
原文确实不对。
可以说： I am feeling better as the weather cools off.
无语病，关键就在于feel这个动词是系动词，主语可以是物，比如：It feels good.因此前后主语一致，都是天气，后边feeling more and better是结果状语，是天气边凉爽，引起的结果（feel better）
阁下是口头语，不适合出现在书信中，另外阁下本事就是尊称不用再加尊敬的。