帮我看看这篇英语作文是否有错I have a happy,a warm family.In my family,has five people,father,mother,brother,sister,and me.My father is a boss,he is tall,he wears a pair of glasses,he likes watching TV.Mum was a boss,she is not fat and n

帮我看看这篇英语作文是否有错I have a happy,a warm family.In my family,has five people,father,mother,brother,sister,and me.My father is a boss,he is tall,he wears a pair of glasses,he likes watching TV.Mum was a boss,she is not fat and n
帮我看看这篇英语作文是否有错
I have a happy,a warm family.In my family,has five people,father,mother,brother,sister,and me.My father is a boss,he is tall,he wears a pair of glasses,he likes watching TV.Mum was a boss,she is not fat and not very thin,she likes reading.Brother study in Switzerland a famous school,he likes to play computer.My sister is tall we are in the same class reading books,we all like playing computer.

帮我看看这篇英语作文是否有错I have a happy,a warm family.In my family,has five people,father,mother,brother,sister,and me.My father is a boss,he is tall,he wears a pair of glasses,he likes watching TV.Mum was a boss,she is not fat and n
I have a happy and warm family.there are five members in my family,my father,my mother,my brother,my sister and I,My father is a boss,He is tall.He wears a pair of glasses.He likes watching TV.My mum was a boss,too,but now she is (填个职业）.She is not fat and not very thin.She likes reading.My brother studies in a famous school in Switzerland .He likes to play computer. My sister is tall.We are in the same class,and we like to play computer,too.

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I have a happy and warm family. There is five people in my family, including my father, mother, brother, sister, and me myself. My father work as a boss, he is tall and wears a pair of glasses. My fat...

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I have a happy and warm family. There is five people in my family, including my father, mother, brother, sister, and me myself. My father work as a boss, he is tall and wears a pair of glasses. My father likes to watch TV. My mom once works as a boss, she is neither fat or thin and she likes to read. My brother studies in a famous school in Switzerland and he likes to play computer. My sister is tall and we are in the same class reading books, both of us like to play computer.
可能不完全正确，但是以我在国际学校读书的水平，应该算不错了吧 （不好意思，我语法比较差最差）

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five peoples,mum is a boss too.