帮我看看我的英语作文的语法错误(我初中水平)Olympic Games is window,i keep watch.this is a big window.through it,i can see are worlds.here it is changing every day.our country becoming more and more beautiful.some people are start l

帮我看看我的英语作文的语法错误(我初中水平)Olympic Games is window,i keep watch.this is a big window.through it,i can see are worlds.here it is changing every day.our country becoming more and more beautiful.some people are start l
帮我看看我的英语作文的语法错误(我初中水平)
Olympic Games is window,i keep watch.
this is a big window.through it,i can see are worlds.here it is changing every day.our country becoming more and more beautiful.some people are start learning english.there is old man and children.to be a chinese we must learning english to meeting 2008 olympic games.

帮我看看我的英语作文的语法错误(我初中水平)Olympic Games is window,i keep watch.this is a big window.through it,i can see are worlds.here it is changing every day.our country becoming more and more beautiful.some people are start l
The Olympic Games is a window,through whcih I can see a lot.
It is a big window, and what i can see is the world. In the window everything is changing every day. Our country is becoming more and more beautiful. Some people are starting learning English. Among them are old men and children. As a chinese we must learn some English to welcome the 2008 Olympic Games.

Olympic Games is a window, through which I can see the whole world.
And it's changing everyday.
Our country is becoming more and more beautiful.
Some people are starting learning English, such as the old people and children.
As a Chinese, we must learn English well to welcome the Beijing 2008 Olympic Games

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this is a big window.through it, i can see (are去掉)加 定冠词the world(s去掉). here it is changing every day.our country 加 is becoming more and more beautiful.some people are (start 去掉) learning english 加 now...

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this is a big window.through it, i can see (are去掉)加 定冠词the world(s去掉). here it is changing every day.our country 加 is becoming more and more beautiful.some people are (start 去掉) learning english 加 now,including old men and children. to be a chinese we must learn（动词原形） english to meet（动词原形） 2008 olympic games．
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1．句子开头第一个字母要大写．
2．情态动词can， must后面是动词原形
3．是动词后面只能接动词分词，不能接动词原形．
4．专有名词第一个字母要大写，如：Olympic Games，English

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一、 Olympic Games is window ----Olympic Games is a window.
二、 i keep watch ----应该是连接上一句的.改为which I will keep watching.
三、 this is a big window.through it, i can see are worlds. ----Thi...

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一、 Olympic Games is window ----Olympic Games is a window.
二、 i keep watch ----应该是连接上一句的.改为which I will keep watching.
三、 this is a big window.through it, i can see are worlds. ----This is a big window,through which I can see the whole world或者what I can see through it is the whole world.
四、 here it is changing every day ----And it is changing everyday.
五、 our country becoming more and more beautiful ---Our country is becoming more and more beatiful.
六、 some people are start learning english ----Some people have started learning English.
七、 there is old man and children ----应该是连着上一句的，both the old and the young(children)
八、 to be a chinese we must learning english to meeting 2008 olympic games. ----As a chinese ，we must learn English to welcome the 2008 Olympic Games.

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