高中英语短文改错和作文怎么写?速求!高分,再加50!作文原创!英语,手打啊

高中英语短文改错和作文怎么写?速求!高分,再加50!作文原创!英语,手打啊
高中英语短文改错和作文怎么写?速求!高分,再加50!作文原创!
英语,手打啊

高中英语短文改错和作文怎么写?速求!高分,再加50!作文原创!英语,手打啊
高中英语短文改错和作文怎么写?速求!高分,再加50!2012-3-24 18:51 州一中薛鹏 | 100 | 浏览次数：23次
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改错要看语感的.作文么 我们报纸上的作文从来不写的.赞同0| 评论 2012-3-24 22:22 曾志扬 | 十一级
Dear Jack,
Glad to hear that you “are” visiting the Great wall this weekend.I have some advices for you before you start your trip.You will be “here” late tomorrow afternoon,because you must have a good plan for your “trip” tomorrow.Of course you will be able to get here sooner if you take a taxi,but “actually” you have to spend a lot “more” money and neither ” is” necessary.Comparing with the bus,the subway is “faster”.“But” you can’t go there directly by subway,so when you get off the subway,“then” take a bus.Be sure to wear your “sport” shoes as the Great Wall is….
作文:
An English-speaking partner wanted
I am looking for someone who can speak English to accompany me to our local English learning club.The location of the club is next to the People’s Park,a place with wonderful surroundings,ideal for English learning.The meeting time of the club is an hour before lunch time every day.Five days a week,no Saturdays and no Sundays Program mainly consist of interviewing foreigners who could speak English.If anyone interested,please contact me at wangwei@126.com.An interview will be arranged.赞同0| 评论 2012-3-24 23:32 小幽ice | 十三级
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10.第十二行.去掉and 赞同0| 评论
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Dear Jack,
Glad to hear that you “are” visiting the Great wall this weekend. I have some advices for you before you start your trip. You will be “here” late tomorrow afternoon, because you must ha...

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Dear Jack,
Glad to hear that you “are” visiting the Great wall this weekend. I have some advices for you before you start your trip. You will be “here” late tomorrow afternoon, because you must have a good plan for your “trip” tomorrow. Of course you will be able to get here sooner if you take a taxi, but “actually” you have to spend a lot “more” money and neither ” is” necessary. Comparing with the bus, the subway is “faster”. “But” you can’t go there directly by subway, so when you get off the subway, “then” take a bus. Be sure to wear your “sport” shoes as the Great Wall is….
作文:
An English-speaking partner wanted
I am looking for someone who can speak English to accompany me to our local English learning club. The location of the club is next to the People’s Park, a place with wonderful surroundings, ideal for English learning. The meeting time of the club is an hour before lunch time every day. Five days a week, no Saturdays and no Sundays Program mainly consist of interviewing foreigners who could speak English. If anyone interested, please contact me at wangwei@126.com. An interview will be arranged.

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1。第一行were-are
2.第三行advices-advice
3.第五行because-unless
4.第五行you-your
5.第七行here-there
6. 第八行actual-actually
7.第九行。去掉it
8. 第九行comparing-compared
9.第十行 fast-faster
10.第十二行。去掉and

改错要看语感的。作文么 我们报纸上的作文从来不写的。